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JOSEFINA
DOMINGUEZ
No
No
Yes
Here’s a tightened, clear, and balanced revision that keeps your intent while smoothing the tone and flow: I am running to serve as a pre-primary delegate to help ensure a broad and diverse field of primary candidates. I believe it is essential to bring new voices into our primaries and to foster an equally diverse and robust conversation for each office. To strengthen our party, we must challenge ourselves to be more inclusive and welcoming—embracing new communities and perspectives and thoughtfully weaving them into our established norms.